๐Ÿš€ ์˜์–ด ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์‹œํ—˜ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด ๋งˆ์Šคํ„ฐํ•˜๊ธฐ ๐Ÿš€

์ฝ˜ํ…์ธ  ๋Œ€ํ‘œ ์ด๋ฏธ์ง€ - ๐Ÿš€ ์˜์–ด ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์‹œํ—˜ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด ๋งˆ์Šคํ„ฐํ•˜๊ธฐ ๐Ÿš€

 

 

์•ˆ๋…•ํ•˜์„ธ์š”, ์˜์–ด ๊ณ ์ˆ˜๋‹˜๋“ค! ์˜ค๋Š˜์€ ์˜์–ด ์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์‹œํ—˜์—์„œ ๊ผญ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฒ•์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์•Œ์•„๋ณผ ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”. ์ด๊ฑฐ ํ•˜๋‚˜๋งŒ ์ œ๋Œ€๋กœ ์•Œ๋ฉด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์˜์–ด ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์‹ค๋ ฅ์ด ์ˆ˜์ง ์ƒ์Šนํ•  ๊ฑฐ๋ผ๊ณ ์š”! ๐Ÿ˜Ž

๋จผ์ €, ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๊ฐ€ ๋ญ”์ง€ ์•„์‹œ๋‚˜์š”? ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ๋งํ•ด์„œ ๋ฌธ์žฅ๊ณผ ๋ฌธ์žฅ์„ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์ด์–ด์ฃผ๋Š” ๋งˆ๋ฒ•์˜ ๋‹จ์–ด๋“ค์ด์—์š”. ์ด ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์ž˜ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ํ›จ์”ฌ ๋” ๋งค๋„๋Ÿฝ๊ณ  ํ”„๋กœํŽ˜์…”๋„ํ•ด ๋ณด์ผ ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”. ใ…‹ใ…‹ใ…‹

๐Ÿ”‘ ํ•ต์‹ฌ ํฌ์ธํŠธ: ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋ฅผ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์ „๋‹ฌํ•˜๊ณ , ๊ธ€์˜ ํ๋ฆ„์„ ๋ถ€๋“œ๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ฃผ๋Š” ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๋„๊ตฌ์˜ˆ์š”!

์ž, ์ด์ œ ๋ณธ๊ฒฉ์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด์˜ ์„ธ๊ณ„๋กœ ๋“ค์–ด๊ฐ€๋ณผ๊นŒ์š”? ์ค€๋น„๋˜์…จ๋‚˜์š”? ๊ณ ๊ณ ์”ฝ~ ๐Ÿƒโ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ’จ

1. ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด์˜ ์ข…๋ฅ˜ ๐ŸŒˆ

๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋Š” ํฌ๊ฒŒ ๋‹ค์„ฏ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ข…๋ฅ˜๋กœ ๋‚˜๋ˆŒ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ๊ฐ๊ฐ์˜ ์—ญํ• ๊ณผ ๋Œ€ํ‘œ์ ์ธ ํ‘œํ˜„๋“ค์„ ์•Œ์•„๋ณผ๊นŒ์š”?

  • ์ถ”๊ฐ€ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด:
    • Furthermore (๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€)
    • In addition (๋ง๋ถ™์—ฌ)
    • Moreover (๋”์šฑ์ด)
    • Additionally (์ถ”๊ฐ€์ ์œผ๋กœ)
  • ๋Œ€์กฐ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด:
    • However (ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ)
    • On the other hand (๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์—)
    • Nevertheless (๊ทธ๋Ÿผ์—๋„ ๋ถˆ๊ตฌํ•˜๊ณ )
    • In contrast (๋Œ€์กฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ)
  • ์›์ธ๊ณผ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด:
    • Therefore (๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฏ€๋กœ)
    • As a result (๊ฒฐ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ)
    • Consequently (๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ)
    • Thus (๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ)
  • ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๋“ค ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด:
    • For example (์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด)
    • For instance (์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค๋ฉด)
    • Such as (~์™€ ๊ฐ™์€)
    • To illustrate (์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด)
  • ์ˆœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด:
    • Firstly, Secondly, Finally (์ฒซ์งธ, ๋‘˜์งธ, ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ)
    • Meanwhile (๊ทธ ๋™์•ˆ์—)
    • Subsequently (๊ทธ ํ›„์—)
    • In conclusion (๊ฒฐ๋ก ์ ์œผ๋กœ)

์™€์šฐ! ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋งŽ์€ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๊ฐ€ ์žˆ๋‹ค๋‹ˆ, ๋†€๋ž์ง€ ์•Š๋‚˜์š”? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ ์ด ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์ž˜ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ํ›จ์”ฌ ๋” ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์ด๊ณ  ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”.

๐Ÿ’ก ๊ฟ€ํŒ: ์ด ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์™ธ์šฐ๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ์–ด๋ ต๋‹ค๋ฉด, ์žฌ๋Šฅ๋„ท์—์„œ ์˜์–ด ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ํŠœํ„ฐ๋ง์„ ๋ฐ›์•„๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๋„ ์ข‹์€ ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์ด์—์š”! ์ „๋ฌธ๊ฐ€์˜ ๋„์›€์„ ๋ฐ›์œผ๋ฉด ํ›จ์”ฌ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ์‹ค๋ ฅ์ด ๋Š˜ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๋‹ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ž, ์ด์ œ ๊ฐ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š”์ง€ ์ž์„ธํžˆ ์•Œ์•„๋ณผ๊นŒ์š”? ๋ ˆ์ธ ๊ณ ! ๐Ÿš€

2. ์ถ”๊ฐ€ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฒ• ๐Ÿ”

์ถ”๊ฐ€ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์ฃผ์žฅ์„ ๋”์šฑ ๊ฐ•ํ™”ํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์„ ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”. ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ๋…์ž๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ "์•„, ์ด ์‚ฌ๋žŒ ์ •๋ง ์ด ์ฃผ์ œ์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ๊นŠ์ด ์ƒ๊ฐํ–ˆ๊ตฌ๋‚˜!"๋ผ๋Š” ์ธ์ƒ์„ ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ฃ . ๐Ÿ˜Ž

1. Furthermore (๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€)

Furthermore๋Š” ์•ž์„œ ๋งํ•œ ๋‚ด์šฉ์— ๋”ํ•ด ์ถ”๊ฐ€์ ์ธ ์ •๋ณด๋‚˜ ์ฃผ์žฅ์„ ์ œ์‹œํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: Studying abroad improves language skills. Furthermore, it provides valuable cultural experiences.

ํ•ด์„: ํ•ด์™ธ ์œ ํ•™์€ ์–ธ์–ด ์‹ค๋ ฅ์„ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์‹œํ‚ต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฒŒ๋‹ค๊ฐ€, ๊ท€์ค‘ํ•œ ๋ฌธํ™”์  ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2. In addition (๋ง๋ถ™์—ฌ)

In addition์€ 'Furthermore'์™€ ๋น„์Šทํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ๊ณต์‹์ ์ธ ๋Š๋‚Œ์ด ๋“ค์–ด์š”. ํ•™์ˆ ์ ์ธ ๊ธ€์—์„œ ์ž์ฃผ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ผ์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: Regular exercise improves physical health. In addition, it has positive effects on mental well-being.

ํ•ด์„: ๊ทœ์น™์ ์ธ ์šด๋™์€ ์‹ ์ฒด ๊ฑด๊ฐ•์„ ๊ฐœ์„ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ง๋ถ™์—ฌ, ์ •์‹  ๊ฑด๊ฐ•์—๋„ ๊ธ์ •์ ์ธ ์˜ํ–ฅ์„ ๋ฏธ์นฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3. Moreover (๋”์šฑ์ด)

Moreover๋Š” ์•ž์„  ๋‚ด์šฉ๋ณด๋‹ค ๋” ์ค‘์š”ํ•˜๊ฑฐ๋‚˜ ๋†€๋ผ์šด ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”. "๊ทธ๊ฒƒ๋ฟ๋งŒ ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ ์ด๊ฒƒ๋„ ์žˆ์–ด!" ๊ฐ™์€ ๋Š๋‚Œ์ด์ฃ .

์˜ˆ์‹œ: This smartphone has a high-quality camera. Moreover, its battery life is exceptional.

ํ•ด์„: ์ด ์Šค๋งˆํŠธํฐ์€ ๊ณ ํ’ˆ์งˆ ์นด๋ฉ”๋ผ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ€์ง€๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋”์šฑ์ด, ๋ฐฐํ„ฐ๋ฆฌ ์ˆ˜๋ช…์ด ๋งค์šฐ ๋›ฐ์–ด๋‚ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

4. Additionally (์ถ”๊ฐ€์ ์œผ๋กœ)

Additionally๋Š” 'In addition'๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ๋ถ€๋“œ๋Ÿฌ์šด ๋Š๋‚Œ์ด์—์š”. ์ผ์ƒ์ ์ธ ๋Œ€ํ™”๋‚˜ ๊ธ€์—์„œ๋„ ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: This restaurant offers delicious food. Additionally, the service is excellent.

ํ•ด์„: ์ด ๋ ˆ์Šคํ† ๋ž‘์€ ๋ง›์žˆ๋Š” ์Œ์‹์„ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์ถ”๊ฐ€์ ์œผ๋กœ, ์„œ๋น„์Šค๋„ ํ›Œ๋ฅญํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์ž˜ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด, ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ํ›จ์”ฌ ๋” ํ’๋ถ€ํ•ด์งˆ ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ๋ง›์žˆ๋Š” ์ผ€์ดํฌ์— ์ƒํฌ๋ฆผ์„ ๋“ฌ๋ฟ ์–น์€ ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ์š”! ๐Ÿฐโœจ

๐Ÿšจ ์ฃผ์˜์‚ฌํ•ญ: ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ์ž์ฃผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ๊ธ€์ด ์ง€๋ฃจํ•ด์งˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ์ ์ ˆํžˆ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ํฌ์ธํŠธ! ๋งˆ์น˜ ์š”๋ฆฌ์— ์†Œ๊ธˆ ๋„ฃ๋“ฏ์ด, ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์ด ๋„ฃ์œผ๋ฉด ๋ง›์ด ์—†์–ด์ง€์ฃ . ใ…‹ใ…‹ใ…‹

์ž, ์ด์ œ ์ถ”๊ฐ€ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์— ๋Œ€ํ•ด ์•Œ์•„๋ดค์–ด์š”. ๋‹ค์Œ์€ ๋Œ€์กฐ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณผ ์ฐจ๋ก€์˜ˆ์š”. ์ค€๋น„๋˜์…จ๋‚˜์š”? ๊ณ ๊ณ ! ๐Ÿš€

3. ๋Œ€์กฐ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฒ• ๐Ÿ”„

๋Œ€์กฐ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋Š” ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ƒ๊ฐ์ด๋‚˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์„ ๋น„๊ตํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”. ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋ฅผ ์ž˜ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ๋”์šฑ ๊ท ํ˜• ์žกํžˆ๊ณ  ๊ฐ๊ด€์ ์œผ๋กœ ๋ณด์ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ์ €์šธ์˜ ์–‘์ชฝ์„ ์ž˜ ๋งž์ถ”๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋ง์ด์ฃ ! โš–๏ธ

1. However (ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ)

However๋Š” ๊ฐ€์žฅ ๋งŽ์ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋˜๋Š” ๋Œ€์กฐ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด์˜ˆ์š”. ์•ž์„  ๋‚ด์šฉ๊ณผ ๋ฐ˜๋Œ€๋˜๋Š” ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์†Œ๊ฐœํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: Many people enjoy summer weather. However, some prefer the cooler temperatures of autumn.

ํ•ด์„: ๋งŽ์€ ์‚ฌ๋žŒ๋“ค์ด ์—ฌ๋ฆ„ ๋‚ ์”จ๋ฅผ ์ฆ๊น๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ์ผ๋ถ€๋Š” ๊ฐ€์„์˜ ๋” ์‹œ์›ํ•œ ๊ธฐ์˜จ์„ ์„ ํ˜ธํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2. On the other hand (๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์—)

On the other hand๋Š” ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ด€์ ์ด๋‚˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์„ ๋น„๊ตํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”. "ํ•œํŽธ์œผ๋กœ๋Š” ์ด๋ ‡์ง€๋งŒ, ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ํ•œํŽธ์œผ๋กœ๋Š” ์ €๋ ‡๋‹ค"๋Š” ๋Š๋‚Œ์ด์ฃ .

์˜ˆ์‹œ: Working from home offers flexibility. On the other hand, it can be isolating.

ํ•ด์„: ์žฌํƒ๊ทผ๋ฌด๋Š” ์œ ์—ฐ์„ฑ์„ ์ œ๊ณตํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋ฐ˜๋ฉด์—, ๊ณ ๋ฆฝ๊ฐ์„ ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3. Nevertheless (๊ทธ๋Ÿผ์—๋„ ๋ถˆ๊ตฌํ•˜๊ณ )

Nevertheless๋Š” ์•ž์„  ๋‚ด์šฉ์—๋„ ๋ถˆ๊ตฌํ•˜๊ณ  ์—ฌ์ „ํžˆ ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋‚˜ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด ์žˆ์Œ์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ผ ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”. ์ข€ ๋” ๊ฐ•ํ•œ ๋Œ€์กฐ๋ฅผ ํ‘œํ˜„ํ•  ๋•Œ ์“ฐ์ด์ฃ .

์˜ˆ์‹œ: The project was extremely challenging. Nevertheless, the team managed to complete it on time.

ํ•ด์„: ๊ทธ ํ”„๋กœ์ ํŠธ๋Š” ๋งค์šฐ ์–ด๋ ค์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿผ์—๋„ ๋ถˆ๊ตฌํ•˜๊ณ , ํŒ€์€ ์ œ์‹œ๊ฐ„์— ์™„๋ฃŒํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐ ์„ฑ๊ณตํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

4. In contrast (๋Œ€์กฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ)

In contrast๋Š” ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์ƒํ™ฉ์ด๋‚˜ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๊ฐ€ ์™„์ „ํžˆ ๋‹ค๋ฅด๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์„ ๊ฐ•์กฐํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: The city is bustling with activity. In contrast, the countryside is peaceful and quiet.

ํ•ด์„: ๋„์‹œ๋Š” ํ™œ๊ธฐ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๋“ ์ฐจ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋Œ€์กฐ์ ์œผ๋กœ, ์‹œ๊ณจ์€ ํ‰ํ™”๋กญ๊ณ  ์กฐ์šฉํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด๋Ÿฐ ๋Œ€์กฐ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ๋”์šฑ ๊นŠ์ด ์žˆ๊ณ  ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๊ด€์ ์„ ๊ฐ€์ง„ ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋ณด์ผ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ์˜ํ™”์—์„œ ๋ฐ˜์ „์ด ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ, ๋…์ž๋“ค์˜ ๊ด€์‹ฌ์„ ๋Œ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ฃ ! ๐ŸŽฌ

๐Ÿ’ก ๊ฟ€ํŒ: ๋Œ€์กฐ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” ๋ฌธ์žฅ์˜ ๊ท ํ˜•์„ ์ž˜ ๋งž์ถ”๋Š” ๊ฒŒ ์ค‘์š”ํ•ด์š”. ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ํ•œ์ชฝ์œผ๋กœ ์น˜์šฐ์น˜์ง€ ์•Š๋„๋ก ์ฃผ์˜ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ํƒœ๊ถŒ๋„ ํ’ˆ์ƒˆ๋ฅผ ํ•  ๋•Œ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๊ท ํ˜•์ด ํ•ต์‹ฌ์ด์—์š”! ๐Ÿฅ‹

์ž, ์ด์ œ ๋Œ€์กฐ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค๋„ ๋งˆ์Šคํ„ฐํ•˜์…จ๋„ค์š”! ๋‹ค์Œ์€ ์›์ธ๊ณผ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์•Œ์•„๋ณผ ์ฐจ๋ก€์˜ˆ์š”. ์ค€๋น„๋๋‚˜์š”? ๊ณ ๊ณ ์”ฝ~ ๐Ÿš€

4. ์›์ธ๊ณผ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฒ• ๐Ÿ”—

์›์ธ๊ณผ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์— ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์ธ ํ๋ฆ„์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ค˜์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ๋„๋ฏธ๋…ธ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ, ํ•˜๋‚˜์˜ ์‚ฌ๊ฑด์ด ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๊ฑด์„ ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์ด๋Œ์–ด๋‚ด๋Š”์ง€ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ฃ . ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์ž˜ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ํ›จ์”ฌ ๋” ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”! ๐ŸŽญ

1. Therefore (๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฏ€๋กœ)

Therefore๋Š” ์•ž์„  ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ๋ฐ”ํƒ•์œผ๋กœ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์ธ ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์„ ์ด๋Œ์–ด๋‚ผ ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”. "์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ด์œ  ๋•Œ๋ฌธ์— ์ด๋Ÿฐ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๊ฐ€ ๋‚˜์™”์–ด"๋ผ๊ณ  ๋งํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ๊ณผ ๋น„์Šทํ•ด์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: The company's profits have decreased significantly. Therefore, they are considering cost-cutting measures.

ํ•ด์„: ํšŒ์‚ฌ์˜ ์ด์ต์ด ํฌ๊ฒŒ ๊ฐ์†Œํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฏ€๋กœ, ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ๋น„์šฉ ์ ˆ๊ฐ ๋ฐฉ์•ˆ์„ ๊ณ ๋ คํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2. As a result (๊ฒฐ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ)

As a result๋Š” 'Therefore'์™€ ๋น„์Šทํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ์ง์ ‘์ ์ธ ์ธ๊ณผ๊ด€๊ณ„๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ผ ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: The storm caused severe damage to the crops. As a result, food prices are expected to rise.

ํ•ด์„: ํญํ’์ด ๋†์ž‘๋ฌผ์— ์‹ฌ๊ฐํ•œ ํ”ผํ•ด๋ฅผ ์ž…ํ˜”์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ์ ์œผ๋กœ, ์‹ํ’ˆ ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ์ด ์˜ค๋ฅผ ๊ฒƒ์œผ๋กœ ์˜ˆ์ƒ๋ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3. Consequently (๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ)

Consequently๋Š” 'As a result'์™€ ๋น„์Šทํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ๊ณต์‹์ ์ธ ๋Š๋‚Œ์ด ๋“ค์–ด์š”. ํ•™์ˆ ์ ์ธ ๊ธ€์ด๋‚˜ ๋น„์ฆˆ๋‹ˆ์Šค ๋ฌธ์„œ์—์„œ ์ž์ฃผ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ผ์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: The new policy restricts car use in the city center. Consequently, air quality has improved significantly.

ํ•ด์„: ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ์ •์ฑ…์€ ๋„์‹ฌ์—์„œ์˜ ์ž๋™์ฐจ ์‚ฌ์šฉ์„ ์ œํ•œํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋”ฐ๋ผ์„œ, ๋Œ€๊ธฐ ์งˆ์ด ํฌ๊ฒŒ ๊ฐœ์„ ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

4. Thus (๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ)

Thus๋Š” 'Therefore'์™€ ๋น„์Šทํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ, ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ๊ฐ„๊ฒฐํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฐ•๋ ฅํ•œ ๋Š๋‚Œ์ด ๋“ค์–ด์š”. ์งง๊ณ  ๊ฐ•ํ•œ ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์„ ๋‚ด๋ฆด ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด ์ข‹์•„์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: The experiment failed to produce the expected results. Thus, the hypothesis was rejected.

ํ•ด์„: ์‹คํ—˜์ด ์˜ˆ์ƒ๋œ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋‚ด์ง€ ๋ชปํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ, ๊ฐ€์„ค์€ ๊ธฐ๊ฐ๋˜์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด๋Ÿฐ ์›์ธ๊ณผ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด, ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ๋งˆ์น˜ ์ถ”๋ฆฌ ์†Œ์„ค์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ํฅ๋ฏธ์ง„์ง„ํ•ด์งˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”! ๐Ÿ•ต๏ธโ€โ™€๏ธ ๋…์ž๋“ค์ด "์•„ํ•˜! ๊ทธ๋ž˜์„œ ์ด๋ ‡๊ฒŒ ๋œ ๊ฑฐ๊ตฌ๋‚˜!"๋ผ๊ณ  ์ƒ๊ฐํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ฃ .

๐Ÿ’ก ๊ฟ€ํŒ: ์›์ธ๊ณผ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋ฅผ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” ์ •๋ง๋กœ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์ธ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์ด ์žˆ๋Š”์ง€ ๊ผญ ํ™•์ธํ•˜์„ธ์š”. ์–ต์ง€๋กœ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐํ•˜๋ฉด ์˜คํžˆ๋ ค ๊ธ€์˜ ์‹ ๋ขฐ๋„๊ฐ€ ๋–จ์–ด์งˆ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์–ด์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ํผ์ฆ ์กฐ๊ฐ์„ ๋งž์ถ”๋“ฏ์ด, ์ •ํ™•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋งž์•„๋–จ์–ด์ ธ์•ผ ํ•ด์š”! ๐Ÿงฉ

์ž, ์ด์ œ ์›์ธ๊ณผ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค๋„ ๋งˆ์Šคํ„ฐํ•˜์…จ๋„ค์š”! ๋‹ค์Œ์€ ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๋“ค ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์•Œ์•„๋ณผ ์ฐจ๋ก€์˜ˆ์š”. ์ค€๋น„๋๋‚˜์š”? ๋ ˆ์ธ ๊ณ ! ๐Ÿš€

5. ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๋“ค ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฒ• ๐ŸŒŸ

์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๋“œ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์€ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์ฃผ์žฅ์„ ๋”์šฑ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ณ  ์ดํ•ดํ•˜๊ธฐ ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ค˜์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ๋ง›์žˆ๋Š” ์Œ์‹์˜ ๋ ˆ์‹œํ”ผ๋ฅผ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ, ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ธ ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค๋ฉด ๋…์ž๋“ค์ด ํ›จ์”ฌ ๋” ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ์ดํ•ดํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ฃ . ์ž, ์ด์ œ ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๋“ค ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์•Œ์•„๋ณผ๊นŒ์š”? ๐Ÿ˜‹

1. For example (์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด)

For example์€ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ํ”ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋˜๋Š” ์˜ˆ์‹œ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด์˜ˆ์š”. ๊ฐ„๋‹จํ•˜๊ณ  ์ง๊ด€์ ์ด๋ผ ์–ด๋–ค ์ƒํ™ฉ์—์„œ๋„ ์ž˜ ์–ด์šธ๋ ค์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: There are many ways to stay healthy. For example, you can exercise regularly, eat a balanced diet, and get enough sleep.

ํ•ด์„: ๊ฑด๊ฐ•์„ ์œ ์ง€ํ•˜๋Š” ๋ฐฉ๋ฒ•์€ ๋งŽ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค์–ด, ๊ทœ์น™์ ์œผ๋กœ ์šด๋™ํ•˜๊ณ , ๊ท ํ˜• ์žกํžŒ ์‹๋‹จ์„ ๋จน๊ณ , ์ถฉ๋ถ„ํ•œ ์ˆ˜๋ฉด์„ ์ทจํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2. For instance (์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค๋ฉด)

For instance๋Š” 'For example'๊ณผ ๊ฑฐ์˜ ๊ฐ™์€ ์˜๋ฏธ์˜ˆ์š”. ๋‹ค๋งŒ, ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ๊ณต์‹์ ์ธ ๋Š๋‚Œ์ด ๋“ค์–ด ํ•™์ˆ ์ ์ธ ๊ธ€์—์„œ ์ž์ฃผ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ผ์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: Many animals have adapted to urban environments. For instance, raccoons have learned to open trash cans to find food.

ํ•ด์„: ๋งŽ์€ ๋™๋ฌผ๋“ค์ด ๋„์‹œ ํ™˜๊ฒฝ์— ์ ์‘ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์˜ˆ๋ฅผ ๋“ค๋ฉด, ๋„ˆ๊ตฌ๋ฆฌ๋“ค์€ ์Œ์‹์„ ์ฐพ๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์“ฐ๋ ˆ๊ธฐํ†ต์„ ์—ฌ๋Š” ๋ฒ•์„ ๋ฐฐ์› ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3. Such as (~์™€ ๊ฐ™์€)

Such as๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ ์˜ˆ์‹œ ์ค‘ ์ผ๋ถ€๋ฅผ ๋‚˜์—ดํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”. ํŠนํžˆ ์งง์€ ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋“ค์„ ๋น ๋ฅด๊ฒŒ ๋‚˜์—ดํ•˜๊ณ  ์‹ถ์„ ๋•Œ ์œ ์šฉํ•ด์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: Many fruits are rich in vitamin C, such as oranges, strawberries, and kiwis.

ํ•ด์„: ๋งŽ์€ ๊ณผ์ผ๋“ค์ด ๋น„ํƒ€๋ฏผ C๊ฐ€ ํ’๋ถ€ํ•œ๋ฐ, ์˜ค๋ Œ์ง€, ๋”ธ๊ธฐ, ํ‚ค์œ„์™€ ๊ฐ™์€ ๊ฒƒ๋“ค์ด ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

4. To illustrate (์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด)

To illustrate๋Š” ์กฐ๊ธˆ ๋” ๊ณต์‹์ ์ด๊ณ  ํ•™์ˆ ์ ์ธ ๋Š๋‚Œ์ด ๋‚˜๋Š” ํ‘œํ˜„์ด์—์š”. ํŠนํžˆ ๋ณต์žกํ•œ ๊ฐœ๋…์„ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•  ๋•Œ ์ž์ฃผ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ผ์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: The concept of supply and demand is fundamental in economics. To illustrate, when the supply of a product decreases, its price typically increases.

ํ•ด์„: ์ˆ˜์š”์™€ ๊ณต๊ธ‰์˜ ๊ฐœ๋…์€ ๊ฒฝ์ œํ•™์—์„œ ๊ธฐ๋ณธ์ ์ž…๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ์„ค๋ช…ํ•˜์ž๋ฉด, ์ œํ’ˆ์˜ ๊ณต๊ธ‰์ด ๊ฐ์†Œํ•˜๋ฉด ์ผ๋ฐ˜์ ์œผ๋กœ ๊ฐ€๊ฒฉ์ด ์ƒ์Šนํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด๋Ÿฐ ์˜ˆ์‹œ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด, ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ๋งˆ์น˜ ์ƒ์ƒํ•œ ๊ทธ๋ฆผ์ฑ…์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋…์ž๋“ค์˜ ๋จธ๋ฆฟ์†์— ๊ทธ๋ ค์งˆ ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”! ๐Ÿ“šโœจ ์ถ”์ƒ์ ์ธ ๊ฐœ๋…๋„ ๊ตฌ์ฒด์ ์ธ ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋กœ ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ฃ .

๐Ÿšจ ์ฃผ์˜์‚ฌํ•ญ: ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๋“ค ๋•Œ๋Š” ๋„ˆ๋ฌด ๋งŽ์€ ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜์—ดํ•˜์ง€ ์•Š๋„๋ก ์ฃผ์˜ํ•˜์„ธ์š”. 2-3๊ฐœ์˜ ์ ์ ˆํ•œ ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋กœ๋„ ์ถฉ๋ถ„ํ•ด์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ์š”๋ฆฌํ•  ๋•Œ ์–‘๋…์„ ๋„ฃ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ , ์ ๋‹นํžˆ ๋„ฃ์–ด์•ผ ๋ง›์žˆ๋Š” ๋ฒ•์ด์ฃ ! ๐Ÿ˜‰

์ž, ์ด์ œ ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๋“ค ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค๋„ ๋งˆ์Šคํ„ฐํ•˜์…จ์–ด์š”! ๋‹ค์Œ์€ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ ์ˆœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์•Œ์•„๋ณผ ์ฐจ๋ก€์˜ˆ์š”. ์ค€๋น„๋๋‚˜์š”? ๊ณ ๊ณ ! ๐Ÿš€

6. ์ˆœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋ฒ• โฐ

์ˆœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋Š” ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์— ์ฒด๊ณ„์™€ ํ๋ฆ„์„ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ค˜์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์—ฌํ–‰์„ ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ, ๋…์ž๋“ค์„ ๊ธ€์˜ ์ฒ˜์Œ๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ์ˆœ์ฐจ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์•ˆ๋‚ดํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ฃ . ์ž, ์ด์ œ ์ด ๋ฉ‹์ง„ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์—ฌํ–‰์˜ ๊ฐ€์ด๋“œ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์–ด๋ณผ๊นŒ์š”? ๐Ÿ•ฐ๏ธ

1. Firstly, Secondly, Finally (์ฒซ์งธ, ๋‘˜์งธ, ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ)

์ด ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์€ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์•„์ด๋””์–ด๋‚˜ ์ฃผ์žฅ์„ ์ˆœ์„œ๋Œ€๋กœ ๋‚˜์—ดํ•  ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ๊ณ„๋‹จ์„ ํ•˜๋‚˜์”ฉ ์˜ฌ๋ผ๊ฐ€๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋…์ž๋“ค์„ ์•ˆ๋‚ดํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ฃ .

์˜ˆ์‹œ: Firstly, we need to identify the problem. Secondly, we should analyze possible solutions. Finally, we can implement the best solution.

ํ•ด์„: ์ฒซ์งธ, ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๋ฌธ์ œ๋ฅผ ํŒŒ์•…ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋‘˜์งธ, ๊ฐ€๋Šฅํ•œ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ์ฑ…๋“ค์„ ๋ถ„์„ํ•ด์•ผ ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์œผ๋กœ, ์ตœ์„ ์˜ ํ•ด๊ฒฐ์ฑ…์„ ์‹คํ–‰ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

2. Meanwhile (๊ทธ ๋™์•ˆ์—)

Meanwhile์€ ๋‘ ๊ฐ€์ง€ ์‚ฌ๊ฑด์ด ๋™์‹œ์— ์ผ์–ด๋‚˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์Œ์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ผ ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ์˜ํ™”์—์„œ ๋‘ ์žฅ๋ฉด์„ ๊ต์ฐจํŽธ์ง‘ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ์š”!

์˜ˆ์‹œ: The scientists were conducting their experiment. Meanwhile, the press was eagerly waiting for the results.

ํ•ด์„: ๊ณผํ•™์ž๋“ค์€ ์‹คํ—˜์„ ์ง„ํ–‰ํ•˜๊ณ  ์žˆ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ ๋™์•ˆ์—, ์–ธ๋ก ์€ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ๊ฐ„์ ˆํžˆ ๊ธฐ๋‹ค๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์žˆ์—ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

3. Subsequently (๊ทธ ํ›„์—)

Subsequently๋Š” ํ•œ ์‚ฌ๊ฑด์ด ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์‚ฌ๊ฑด ๋’ค์— ์ผ์–ด๋‚ฌ์Œ์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ผ ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”. ์‹œ๊ฐ„์˜ ํ๋ฆ„์„ ๋ช…ํ™•ํ•˜๊ฒŒ ๋ณด์—ฌ์ค„ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ฃ .

์˜ˆ์‹œ: The company launched its new product. Subsequently, sales increased by 50%.

ํ•ด์„: ํšŒ์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ์ƒˆ ์ œํ’ˆ์„ ์ถœ์‹œํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ทธ ํ›„์—, ๋งค์ถœ์ด 50% ์ฆ๊ฐ€ํ–ˆ์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

4. In conclusion (๊ฒฐ๋ก ์ ์œผ๋กœ)

In conclusion์€ ๊ธ€์˜ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰ ๋ถ€๋ถ„์—์„œ ๋ชจ๋“  ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ •๋ฆฌํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์„ ๋‚ด๋ฆด ๋•Œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ์—ฌํ–‰์˜ ๋งˆ์ง€๋ง‰์— ๋ชจ๋“  ๊ฒฝํ—˜์„ ๋˜๋Œ์•„๋ณด๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ์š”.

์˜ˆ์‹œ: We've examined various aspects of climate change. In conclusion, immediate action is necessary to mitigate its effects.

ํ•ด์„: ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ๊ธฐํ›„ ๋ณ€ํ™”์˜ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ์ธก๋ฉด์„ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด์•˜์Šต๋‹ˆ๋‹ค. ๊ฒฐ๋ก ์ ์œผ๋กœ, ๊ทธ ์˜ํ–ฅ์„ ์™„ํ™”ํ•˜๊ธฐ ์œ„ํ•ด ์ฆ‰๊ฐ์ ์ธ ํ–‰๋™์ด ํ•„์š”ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค.

์ด๋Ÿฐ ์ˆœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ด๋Š” ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด, ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ๋งˆ์น˜ ์ž˜ ์งœ์—ฌ์ง„ ๋“œ๋ผ๋งˆ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ํฅ๋ฏธ์ง„์ง„ํ•ด์งˆ ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”! ๐Ÿ“บโœจ ๋…์ž๋“ค์ด ๊ธ€์˜ ํ๋ฆ„์„ ์‰ฝ๊ฒŒ ๋”ฐ๋ผ์˜ฌ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๋˜์ฃ .

๐Ÿ’ก ๊ฟ€ํŒ: ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” ์ „์ฒด์ ์ธ ๊ธ€์˜ ๊ตฌ์กฐ๋ฅผ ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ๊ณ„ํšํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ด ์ข‹์•„์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ์—ฌํ–‰ ๊ณ„ํš์„ ์„ธ์šฐ๋“ฏ์ด, ๊ธ€์˜ ์‹œ์ž‘๋ถ€ํ„ฐ ๋๊นŒ์ง€ ์–ด๋–ค ์ˆœ์„œ๋กœ ๋‚ด์šฉ์„ ์ „๊ฐœํ• ์ง€ ๋ฏธ๋ฆฌ ์ƒ๊ฐํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ๊ทธ๋Ÿฌ๋ฉด ๋”์šฑ ๋งค๋„๋Ÿฝ๊ณ  ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์ ์ธ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ธ ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”! ๐Ÿ—บ๏ธ

์ž, ์ด์ œ ๋ชจ๋“  ์ข…๋ฅ˜์˜ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ๋งˆ์Šคํ„ฐํ•˜์…จ๋„ค์š”! ์ด ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์ž˜ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด, ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ์˜์–ด ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์‹ค๋ ฅ์ด ํ•œ์ธต ๋” ์—…๊ทธ๋ ˆ์ด๋“œ๋  ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”. ๋งˆ์น˜ ๋งˆ๋ฒ• ์ง€ํŒก์ด๋ฅผ ์–ป์€ ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ, ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ๋”์šฑ ๋งค๋ ฅ์ ์ด๊ณ  ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๋ณ€ํ•  ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”! โœจ๐Ÿ–‹๏ธ

๐ŸŽ‰ ๋งˆ๋ฌด๋ฆฌ: ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋กœ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ์—…๊ทธ๋ ˆ์ด๋“œํ•˜๊ธฐ ๐ŸŽ‰

์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„, ์ •๋ง ์ˆ˜๊ณ ํ•˜์…จ์–ด์š”! ์ง€๊ธˆ๊นŒ์ง€ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๋Š” ์˜์–ด ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์—์„œ ๊ผญ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๋‹ค์–‘ํ•œ ๋…ผ๋ฆฌ์  ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์•Œ์•„๋ณด์•˜์–ด์š”. ์ด ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์ž˜ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด, ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์ด ๋งˆ์น˜ ํ”„๋กœํŽ˜์…”๋„ํ•œ ์ž‘๊ฐ€์˜ ๊ธ€์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋งค๋„๋Ÿฝ๊ณ  ์„ค๋“๋ ฅ ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๋ณ€ํ•  ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”. ๐Ÿ˜Ž

๊ธฐ์–ตํ•˜์„ธ์š”:

  • ์ถ”๊ฐ€ ์ •๋ณด๋ฅผ ์ œ๊ณตํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” Furthermore, In addition ๋“ฑ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
  • ๋Œ€์กฐ๋ฅผ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ผ ๋•Œ๋Š” However, On the other hand ๋“ฑ์„ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
  • ์›์ธ๊ณผ ๊ฒฐ๊ณผ๋ฅผ ์„ค๋ช…ํ•  ๋•Œ๋Š” Therefore, As a result ๋“ฑ์„ ์จ๋ณด์„ธ์š”.
  • ์˜ˆ์‹œ๋ฅผ ๋“ค ๋•Œ๋Š” For example, Such as ๋“ฑ์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”.
  • ์ˆœ์„œ๋‚˜ ์‹œ๊ฐ„์„ ๋‚˜ํƒ€๋‚ผ ๋•Œ๋Š” Firstly, Subsequently ๋“ฑ์„ ํ™œ์šฉํ•˜์„ธ์š”.

์ด ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•˜๋ฉด์„œ ๊ฐ€์žฅ ์ค‘์š”ํ•œ ๊ฒƒ์€ ๋ฐ”๋กœ ์—ฐ์Šต์ด์—์š”! ๋งˆ์น˜ ์ƒˆ๋กœ์šด ๋Œ„์Šค ๋™์ž‘์„ ๋ฐฐ์šฐ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ, ์ฒ˜์Œ์—๋Š” ์–ด์ƒ‰ํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์ง€๋งŒ ๊ณ„์† ์—ฐ์Šตํ•˜๋‹ค ๋ณด๋ฉด ์ž์—ฐ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•  ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ๊ฒŒ ๋  ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”. ๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿ•บ

๐ŸŒŸ ์ตœ์ข… ๊ฟ€ํŒ: ์˜์–ด๋กœ ๋œ ๊ธฐ์‚ฌ๋‚˜ ์ฑ…์„ ์ฝ์„ ๋•Œ, ์ด๋Ÿฐ ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์ด ์–ด๋–ป๊ฒŒ ์‚ฌ์šฉ๋˜์—ˆ๋Š”์ง€ ์ฃผ์˜ ๊นŠ๊ฒŒ ์‚ดํŽด๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์ด ์ข‹์•„ํ•˜๋Š” ์ฃผ์ œ๋กœ ์งง์€ ๊ธ€์„ ์จ๋ณด๋ฉด์„œ ์ด ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ์ ๊ทน์ ์œผ๋กœ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด๋ณด์„ธ์š”. ์‹ค์ „์—์„œ ์‚ฌ์šฉํ•ด๋ณผ์ˆ˜๋ก ๋” ๋นจ๋ฆฌ ์ต์ˆ™ํ•ด์งˆ ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”!

์ž, ์ด์ œ ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์€ ์˜์–ด ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ์˜ ๋งˆ๋ฒ•์‚ฌ๊ฐ€ ๋˜์—ˆ์–ด์š”! ๐Ÿง™โ€โ™‚๏ธโœจ ์ด ์—ฐ๊ฒฐ์–ด๋“ค์„ ํ™œ์šฉํ•ด์„œ ๋”์šฑ ๋ฉ‹์ง„ ๊ธ€์„ ์“ฐ์‹ค ์ˆ˜ ์žˆ์„ ๊ฑฐ์˜ˆ์š”. ์—ฌ๋Ÿฌ๋ถ„์˜ ๊ธ€์“ฐ๊ธฐ ์‹ค๋ ฅ ํ–ฅ์ƒ์„ ์‘์›ํ•ฉ๋‹ˆ๋‹ค! ํ™”์ดํŒ…! ๐Ÿ‘